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[ER] Hostage - Chapter 6: Abby

Ri-buona Pasqua a todos!

She’s staring at the closed door. The policeman next to her is still shouting in the bullhorn. She’s not listening to him, she’s too focused on the door.

She isn’t noticing the crowd of people approaching the scene, she isn’t seeing the ambulance or the blinking lights. She can only see the door. Behind that door there is Luka and she’s ready to give her life in order to see him  safe.

The policeman goes on with his speech. There’s a woman near him now. Abby is told she’s Sandra, Ames’s ex-wife. Sandra takes the bullhorn.

“Curtis, it’s me, Sandra. Can you hear me? They said you took a man… the doctor who cured you  years ago. Curtis, please, let him free. He’s not the cause of our divorce. I stopped loving you before your accident and…”

“Wonderful… making him angrier can surely save Luka”

“Miss, I think we should let Miss Thompson give a try”

“She’s upsetting him more and more! This man has a gun, he’s in an isolated room alone with my boyfriend, and he thinks Luka is the responsible of all his misfortune! How can you say to me to let her give a try?”

“Should I go on?”

“Yes, miss Thompson, go on for a while”

Abby sighs, discomforted. She passes a hand on her eyes. Sandra goes on speaking but the whole house seems dead. She thinks at Luka, his cute smile, his deep voice, the first time she met him. How could she be supposed to spend her life without him?

She approaches Sandra and steals the bullhorn. It’s cold and a little heavy.

She takes a deep breath:

“Luka, it’s me. I don’t know if you can hear me, but I hope so. I really hope so. Listen… you know, I’m not the person who’s used to speak about feelings, but… Luka… I’m not angry at you, I need you to know that. I’m fine and Joe’s fine too, don’t worry. You did nothing wrong, ok?”, her voice starts to break, but she goes on, “I don’t know if you’re ok now, but hold on, please, hold on. I’ll find a solution and in no time you’ll be there with me, ok? Just hold on, Luka. I need you and Joe too… I need… us… hold on…”  

She puts down the bullhorn, she has no words left. She only hopes he has heard her. She only hopes he’s ok.

The policeman is speaking to another agent. They want to act, try to enter. She’s scared. Sandra walks closer to her and pats her shoulder.

The SWAT team is ready. They’re armed and determined. They’re walking towards the house.

Suddenly a shot is heard. Abby starts to tremble. She needs to go in, she needs to see Luka. The policeman is holding her. The SWAT team broke the door. She can’t breathe…


Vi prego, è Pasqua... non lasciate minacce di morte...

Comments

Eppure le mnacce di morte a Pasqua mi sembrano così in tono...
Sandra è decisamente fuori di testa, Ames è armato e minaccia l'uomo che ritiene fonte di tutti i suoi guai e lei come pensa di salvarlo? dicendogli che non lo amava più già da prima e che fingeva solo? Brava, non c'è che dire! Che carina Abby! Io non avei avuto la sua forza!
Come sempre complimenti e AGGIORNA PRESTO!
Hvala, hvala, hvala.
Ebbene sì, Sandra è un'idiota, ma è solo per aggiungere "pepe" alla storia. Ma lei gli parla così perchè sa quanto Ames sia ragionevole e razionale... no?
Festività o meno la minaccia di morte dovevi aspettartela!
Come ripeto ad ogni capitolo: basta interromperli in questa maniera! Soprattutto in un momento così importante, il ritrovamento del Croato morto, anche se sospetto che dopo il delizioso tatto che ha utilizzato la moglie nel dirgli: tesoro ho smesso di amarti dal giorno dopo che è finita la Luna di Miele alla Fiji! Penso che sia Ames il cadavere che troveranno sul pavimento, oppure si era messo dietro al Croato in modo da uccidesi con lui... *cipollino pensieroso*